Oh, BARBARA MANATEE, you are the ONE FOR ME...
I love the "First Chapters That Don't Suck..." Great advice with great examples. I too would read 2 pages of someone making soup if they were muttering about killing a god.
I think I have to go back and review my first chapter.
Sam... please stop calling me out like this. It's embarrassing.
I just post what I see in the mirror every morning, sir.
WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY MIRROR?!? Evil! Sorcerer! Back, BACK! Wait.... Nevermind. The assumption of risk is on you. :P
He's not calling out you, he's calling out me!
Dear lord just the tagline gave me an earworm!
MY JOB HERE IS DONE. :)
But you can't come because you don't speak French!
“DID WE JUST BECOME BEST FRIENDS?”
I love the "First Chapters That Don't Suck..." Great advice with great examples. I too would read 2 pages of someone making soup if they were muttering about killing a god.
I think I have to go back and review my first chapter.
Sam... please stop calling me out like this. It's embarrassing.
I just post what I see in the mirror every morning, sir.
WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY MIRROR?!? Evil! Sorcerer! Back, BACK! Wait.... Nevermind. The assumption of risk is on you. :P
He's not calling out you, he's calling out me!
Dear lord just the tagline gave me an earworm!
MY JOB HERE IS DONE. :)
But you can't come because you don't speak French!
“DID WE JUST BECOME BEST FRIENDS?”