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maryh10000's avatar

Oh, that was wonderful! So funny! I had to read it out loud to husband.

Cedar Sanderson's avatar

I really love how you give the plot a little tug and a twist at the end and suddenly it makes me laugh.

Sam Robb's avatar

Shari's been my editor, and she really does NOT like MilSF - it's just not her cup of tea. So I wrote this with her in mind, hoping that she'd enjoy the change up :)