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Debra Reynolds's avatar

This needs to be a whole book—perhaps a series—this is fab.

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maryh10000's avatar

Wonderful! I'm a real sucker for that kind of family dynamics. I'd read a litRPG novel with a character like that -- hint, hint.

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Parrish Baker's avatar

Yeah I like this!!

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Back Porch Writer's avatar

This needs to be published somehow, Sam. The characters, the setting, the challenge all drew me in. When you can, write more.

The Council of Elders has spoken. 🫡

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Sherri Mines's avatar

I like where this is going!

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